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    dedpool1052
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    This is for those poems/song lyrics that you love, or have a very deep resonance with you. I’ll start with a few poems I wrote years ago.

    Trying my best to cope,
    And looking for a shred of hope.
    Praying for a ray of light,
    To let me know that it’s alright.
    Will you help silence these cries?
    And wipe the tears from my eyes.
    Help me numb the pain inside, stay until the pain subsides.
    Please help heal this broken soul, mend this heart and make it whole.
    Make me better than I am,
    Make me feel I’m worth a damn.

    And here’s another.

    A thousand different excuses, everyone of them useless.
    Things aren’t the way they use to be,
    Things have changed between you and me.
    I use to feel so close to you.
    I thought that you felt the same too.
    The times that I was not there, it’s not that I did not care.
    There was nothing that I could do, obligations kept me from you. Now I feel We’ve grown apart, divided like a broken heart.

    Sitting here like uninvited company.

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    Not bad man… Definitely on the dark side… If you were a postal worker I might be concerned… but on the other hand, if you could somehow work in “smacking down a ho” and “popping a cap” in some mofo, they could easily be mainstream rap tunes.

    Good stuff!

    Trapped in time, surrounded by evil, low on gas. When does this happen in the movie?

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    Not bad man… Definitely on the dark side… If you were a postal worker I might be concerned… but on the other hand, if you could somehow work in “smacking down a ho” and “popping a cap” in some mofo, they could easily be mainstream rap tunes.

    Good stuff!

    Dark is where I feel I’m most inspired.

    Sitting here like uninvited company.

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    Roses are red

    violets are blue.

    My dog farted

    i smell poo….

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    Not bad man… Definitely on the dark side… If you were a postal worker I might be concerned… but on the other hand, if you could somehow work in “smacking down a ho” and “popping a cap” in some mofo, they could easily be mainstream rap tunes.

    Good stuff!

    Dark is where I feel I’m most inspired.

    Same with my metal art. People always ask me for chriistmas stuff, and it always has a pentagram or the grim reaper when Im done.

    Trapped in time, surrounded by evil, low on gas. When does this happen in the movie?

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    Roses are red

    violets are blue.

    My dog farted

    i smell poo….

    beautiful bro

    Trapped in time, surrounded by evil, low on gas. When does this happen in the movie?

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    “A solitary man. An enigmatic child.
    A riddle never solved. A prisoner exiled.”

    from Black Sabbath’s “Loner”

    Sitting here like uninvited company.

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    “A solitary man. An enigmatic child.

    A riddle never solved. A prisoner exiled.”

    from Black Sabbath’s “Loner”

    You should listen to my buddy’s band “Juicehead” on the Misfits Records Label. His writing is incredible… Very true to life stuff about the world… Drugs, alcohol, music, politics…

    It seems to me there’s new curriculum, without a balanced equilibrium,

    Whatever happened to the way things were, it’s all  blur, no medium.

    Idiocy is the prerequisite, when MTV has got their hands in it,

    Abomination, a God awful shame, and who’s to blame? Mass media.

    That’s how it’s gonna be, all I see it mental truancy,

    Their not as clever as they seem, it’s all the same to me, no new philosophy is seen.

     

    I literally don’t think Juicehead has a single song that’s poorly written. Their stuff out there is old, but new stuff is coming soon I hope.

     

    Trapped in time, surrounded by evil, low on gas. When does this happen in the movie?

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    Same with my metal art. People always ask me for chriistmas stuff, and it always has a pentagram or the grim reaper when Im done.

    Sorta like that manger scene you made, with lil’ baby Jesus’ face painted up like King Diamond?
    That shit was beautiful, man.

    Sitting here like uninvited company.

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    Two hearts are broken, travesty.
    With wounds cut deeper than you see.
    A darkness that will swallow light.
    Obscuring lines of wrong and right.
    Decisions that were made in fear.
    Blurring thoughts seem to be so clear.
    As I look deep into your eyes,
    I then begin to realize.
    You hide behind a disguise,
    Built of promises and lies.
    As fragile as you are,
    You lost touch with who you are.
    As broken as your world became,
    After that day, you weren’t the same.
    There’s no way to fulfill the need,
    Too late to change the life we lead.
    No way to wash away the sin.
    To cleanse, purge, and begin again.
    So many years have passed since then.
    So much time since we began.
    So much time I still mourn the day,
    You said goodbye and walked away.

    Sitting here like uninvited company.

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    You can only break a heart, until it falls apart.
    And all that’s left is dust, and there’s no one left to trust.
    No longer feel the love, from the God above.
    No longer do I care, there’s no heart left to tear.
    There’s nothing left of me, as far as I can see.
    Nothing left for you to break.
    Nothing left for you to take.

    Sitting here like uninvited company.

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    I don’t feel I can relate.
    Hard to breathe, I hesitate.
    To speak my mind or how I feel.
    Wish I could find something that’s real.
    Living my life in chains.
    They tell me it’s growing pains.
    The hard lessons that I learn,
    Is just the karma that I earn.

    Sitting here like uninvited company.

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